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Addicted

November 24, 2011
By MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Just one, you promised yourself.
Only once will i use this drug.
Oh but it gets you so far, just once more i swear I'm not addicted. Oh being up is so so nice! Once more and i admit, I'm hooked. Feeling the pain i find a blade. Scared but anxious to find what it does. Feeling the blood trickle down your arm. Releasing the demons damaged harm. You now find yourself addicted to releasing the pain in your life. Why must the world be so cruel! Mean glares! Stares! People don't understand, they never will. On how it feels to finally find something in your life that helps. Even if you do get addicted. . . . .

© Lindsay S., Billings, MT

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thomakab14 SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2013 at 3:33 pm
thomakab14 SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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Awkward transition between drugs and cutting... I don't understand it? Is the drug actually the blade?
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD said...
on Sep. 22 2012 at 6:54 pm
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Wow..... awesome, slightly creepy- but in a good way, and vewry true. Love it! :) FIX your punctuation and you will be Golden  
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 10:31 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Hey thanks:) btw im on here all the time there darlin
Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 6:40 pm
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The rhythm and stanzas were kind of hard to follow, but the overall message of it was astounding.
Hoosier BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 10:33 pm
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really good poem...and by the way get on here more so i got somebody like me to talk to haha cause some of the kids are.....well ya know
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:17 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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thanks much:)
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:11 pm
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this is really good... great job!!
byebye said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:52 pm
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I love this poem! It's meaningful strong and poignant well done :)

 

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on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:43 pm
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This has a lot of potential, though I feel it needs a little work, I'd suggest restructuring it a bit, you started out with the subject as 'I', but changed it to 'you' towards the end.

Thanks for sharing! :)