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No Particular Gloom
December 20, 2011
A storm cluod shrouds the day
Its gloomy vail hanging over the city
The sun fights to get through
To bring hope
Bring it anew
Light’s sword pokes and prods
Finds a weak spot
And lo! it barges through
Now you see a shaft of light
And I see you
© Kena A., Huntsville, AL
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This article has 4 comments.
Brie555 said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 2:34 pm
OH! Lol, well its really cool :D
camohunter19 GOLD said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 1:32 pm
The part where it says "lo! a" isn't a grammatical error or a typo, it is a full stop. It is a cool trick I learned
Brie555 said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 9:23 pm
I totally love your poem! ;D I like how you got that frome a picture of a cloud ;D *hugs* Also I like the last two lines
And lo! a light finds a weak spot through the clouds
Now you can see me and I can se you
leafy said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 2:18 pm
Wow, nice poem! I loved the subject and personification, very creative :). However, I will put out there that the rhyme with through/anew and through/you does kinda bother me, but that may just be me...
P.S. Thankyou neverseeDeath!