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A Sort of Fairy Tale Poem?

November 12, 2011
By -Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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The true friends are the ones who can get you to laugh even in your darkest depressions. ~Me

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Somewhere, anywhere, in the dead
of night.
It could be blue dust that pixies threw into space.
OR
The magnificent sunlight that reflects specs of rays.

Anything, anywhere that could possibly have a chance to maybe...
save your life?
OR
You might just wander alone
when you travel to see nothing.
Discovering that all is lost.
All is lost...?

No...

Don't ever give up.
The future of THAT is in your hands.
So just...
SOAR

© Melanie G., Trumbull, CT

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cookiestar said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 12:27 am
This is a great poem:). Good job!
-Char- GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:36 pm
-Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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The true friends are the ones who can get you to laugh even in your darkest depressions. ~Me

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It's very symbolic, that's why you probably don't get it. But alot of my faverite poems are kind of like this and b famous people. XD
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:34 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

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Kind of confusing... not sure what exactly you are talking about. but i do like the last several lines alot!
-Char- GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:23 pm
-Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Those lat 3 words at the end annoy me because there off to the side :( Sorry bout that. It's automatic,
Zinaidia SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:21 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Wow, very empowering, great job! Just make sure your line spacing is right. Little things that make it easier to read you know? Otherwise great, you have a very unique voice. I dont read many poems like this one. Bravo!
TapTap SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 3:44 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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This so reflects all the choices you have in your life. I love the word SOAR...anyways beautiful poem, 5/5 stars