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I Can't Write A Poem

January 5, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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I can't write a poem,
My hands won't dare touch,
That clean sheet of paper,
Standing in front of my completely blanked out mind,
With its blue and red stripes zooming across,
Around,
And up and down the page,
Causing my fragile head to spin,
Triggering me to fall off my chair,
And shake my head out of disorientation,
Right when I pick my butt back up off the floor,
While I sit back in that stupid chair,
That caused me to fall,
And then I look at that piece of paper that was once empty,
When I realize that it is full of silver scribbles about how,
I can't write a poem

© Andrea S., Oakhurst, CA

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browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:55 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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You're welcome :) ...look at some of mine...tell me what you think!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:41 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thanks so much, means a lot!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:41 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Haha! Thanks! It was supposed to have a little humor in it :).
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:39 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Aww, thanks so much! :)
Fabala_G BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:37 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Try to learn to breathe deeply,<br /> really to taste food when you eat,<br /> and when you sleep, really to sleep.<br /> Try as much as possible to be<br /> wholly alive, with all your might,<br /> and when you laugh, laugh like hell,<br /> and when you get angry, get good<br /> and angry. Try to be alive. You will<br /> be dead soon enough.&quot;<br /> William Saroyan

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Haha this was very funny :) apparently you can write poems! Good job
KityraAnderson PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:34 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
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Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

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hhahahahahaha someone fell out of a chair....... XD I find this poem awesome and funny :D
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:34 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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sounds to me like you can....
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 8:39 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thanks so much, yours it great too! :)
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 8:31 am
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Interesting poem. I found it hilarious that the person fell out of the chair XD I actually have a poem similar to this... Very well written, great job :)