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What Am I?

January 10, 2012
By Phina ELITE, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Phina ELITE, Fort Wayne, Indiana
102 articles 18 photos 16 comments

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"Some of the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen or even touched, they must be felt with the heart." Helen Keller

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I am that space
Between the shadow and the window
In the darkest part of the night

I am that flower
Lying, half-wilted below you
Stranded in a sea of crab grass

I am that fish
Lying on the bottom of the boat
Drowning from the lack of water

I am you heart
Beating slowly and evenly
If not too entirely broken

And I am your skin
Clinging to your frame
The way a child clings to a mother

© Amanda P., Bronx, NY

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Phina ELITE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 8:50 am
Phina ELITE, Fort Wayne, Indiana
102 articles 18 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some of the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen or even touched, they must be felt with the heart." Helen Keller

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Thanks and yeah, no problem
Inksy SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 10:09 pm
Inksy SILVER, A, Utah
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&quot;Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead&quot;<br /> ~Benjamin Frankiln<br /> &quot;Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love.&quot;<br /> ~Moulin Rouge

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Wow! I love your words (: I love the metaphors... beautiful. Keep writing (: Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!