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white christmas

January 11, 2012
By jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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It's hear
Almost near
But for some reason i shead a tear
I am spinning and spinning
I go round and round
Suddenly I am upside down
I've lost my will
I've lost my way
I do not wish to stay
White Walls
White clothes
White everywhere
On one wall I hear
Deck the halls and happiness
The other wall i hear sadness
Disrecpt Abuse
That wall opens and I see a Family
Not just any family but a lost Family
The other wall opens and I see my Family a happy joyful and Beautiful family
Suddenly my tears are away
Now I am gratefull everyday
Never will I go away
Because i do not want to loose my Way

The author's comments:
this means that you should always be grateful for what you because sometimes the grass isn't always so green on the other side

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jazz. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:24 pm
jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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thank you ill fix that right away

on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:38 pm
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

Very good but instead of using "i" use "I." That's a bad grammer habit to get in to, and that's fine. A lot of people do that, and a few of the sentence did not relate to the flow of the piece, other than that- it was AWESOME... 4 stars!