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Raw War

January 12, 2012
By greenyman GOLD, Warnerville, New York
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greenyman GOLD, Warnerville, New York
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I'll tell you a riddle. You're waiting for a train, a train that will take you far away. You know where you hope this train will take you, but you don't know for sure. But it doesn't matter." Inception.

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You have fallen,
On go I.
Friends tumbled.
I move on.
Planting
On move I
Tumbled friends
I go on
Fallen, have you.

© Laura P., Hull, MA

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