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Love is Dead

January 19, 2012
By Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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Death keeps me away,
From loving you everyday,
I count the times,
I wish to reach out,
And turn your sad pout,
Into a foolish smile,
Then I remember,
Love is dead to me,
Cold like December,
Snow that falls lifelessly,
My heart is black,
Just like the moonless night,
There is no light,
I'm dead,
Love is nothing.

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 11:48 am
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks ^w^ really appreciated it even tho u read it at school lol
truthlovehurts said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 10:10 am
truthlovehurts, North Vernon, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Falling in love is like jumping off a really tall building, your brain tells you its not a good idea, but your heart tells you, you can fly.

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Amazing I LOVED IT HAHA :)
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:11 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks lots :)
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:06 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

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Really sad but really beautiful. Nice writing
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:42 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Oh, you're welcome!! ^*^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:40 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thankies lots ^^
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:31 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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This is really awesome, simple yet extremely thought provoking in it's own way, I really enjoyed this piece^^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thankses so much ^w^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks, im not sure how i could make it any better really but ill keep tht in mind if i ever re-do it ^^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:12 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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thanks, its sorta meant to be sad so i guess i succeeded ^^
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:51 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;These are the times that try men&#039;s souls.&quot; - Thomas Paine.<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&#039;t understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could&#039;ve been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am.&quot; - On the Water Front<br /> <br /> &quot;This is my place of failure.&quot;

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Clever rhyming! I love it :)
pointblank SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:45 pm
pointblank SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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It is pretty good, but I think you can make "Love is dead to me stronger" more powerful it lacks the volume the other lines have- it is just to improve, I am not trying to diss you but help you
Mantequilla SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:43 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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Wow. That's powerfully....sad. :( But really good! Keep up the great work!