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Love is Dead
January 19, 2012
Death keeps me away,
From loving you everyday,
I count the times,
I wish to reach out,
And turn your sad pout,
Into a foolish smile,
Then I remember,
Love is dead to me,
Cold like December,
Snow that falls lifelessly,
My heart is black,
Just like the moonless night,
There is no light,
I'm dead,
Love is nothing.
© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA
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This article has 13 comments.
truthlovehurts said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 10:10 am
Amazing I LOVED IT HAHA :)
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:11 pm
thanks lots :)
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:06 pm
Really sad but really beautiful. Nice writing
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:42 pm
Oh, you're welcome!! ^*^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:40 pm
thankies lots ^^
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:31 pm
This is really awesome, simple yet extremely thought provoking in it's own way, I really enjoyed this piece^^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
thankses so much ^w^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:13 pm
thanks, im not sure how i could make it any better really but ill keep tht in mind if i ever re-do it ^^
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:12 pm
thanks, its sorta meant to be sad so i guess i succeeded ^^
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:51 pm
Clever rhyming! I love it :)
pointblank SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:45 pm
It is pretty good, but I think you can make "Love is dead to me stronger" more powerful it lacks the volume the other lines have- it is just to improve, I am not trying to diss you but help you
Mantequilla SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:43 pm
Wow. That's powerfully....sad. :( But really good! Keep up the great work!
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