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January 27, 2012
By youngwriter10 SILVER, Redmond, Oregon
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youngwriter10 SILVER, Redmond, Oregon
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&quot;We&#039;ve all heard that we have to learn from our mistakes, but I think it&#039;s more important to learn from successes. If you learn only from your mistakes, you are inclined to learn only errors.&quot;<br /> -Norman Vincent Peale

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The Earth is a sphere,
so is you’re heart,
All you do is spin around and confuse,
The sun only shines on half of the Earth,
But sadly the sun only shines on you a fourth
The Earth causes disasters,
But yours are worst,
The Earth is a home,
But youre just a cave,
With no warmth or protection,
just a hole in a rock,
You don’t understand how you make me feel,
You don’t understand my wealth,
You just left me to cry,
I wish you were the Earth because,
Because when I needed my space I would go up to heaven,
But instead I am hooked on this dumb obsession.

© Dominique D., Ozone Park, NY

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Sometimes this is how I feel with certain people! :(
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