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Heat me a Tear
January 28, 2012
Heat boil me inside
set peace free
to show the world
I'm back,
filming myself thoughts
pushing reality away
and finally it's true
while every sadness
and every sorrow
an eye-liner along my eye
ending it's beginning
roll down my cheek
heating me a tear
one droplet reflecting the earth
sizzle fearlessly
shifting into gas
steam rise gracefully
an incense's smoke
a dancer curling into the wind
celebrating death too soon
create me a scene
then the last of you
disappearing into the atmosphere
like, "love me leave me,
like the wind..."
opening to the world once more,
believing my relief, living in my tears !
© Carly M., Hopedale, MA
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This article has 21 comments.
AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:36 pm
The emotion is very powerful! Amazing work!
Shadow_Wolf GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:48 pm
I like this poem, but I couldn't pull the meaning out of it.... other than that , well done
skydancer666 GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:52 am
i like how you describe the poem keep up the good work!
thomakab14 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2013 at 4:22 pm
Never would have thought to put heat and tears together, Genius! Wonderful style. I have nto say the lack of punctuation bugged me, but that's just personal preference. Write on! -Kaleb
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 3:06 pm
I must say you are an amazing writer Silver! :) This is very well written and I am so glad to read more. And know if you ever need anyone to talk to I am here.
Sweetwriter15 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:05 am
An amazingly well written piece, I can feel the emotions!
king-raven BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 1:51 am
Really beautiful.. I like your writing style, it's unique!
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 10:03 am
This is a very beautiful piece. Very inspirational. I love your style of writting, and I love the part about the wind. Keep writting.
cookiestar said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 6:48 am
Wow. I love this. It's beautiful, unique and its so meaningiful, I love your style of writing:).
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:57 am
i really like this silver!!
