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Heat me a Tear

January 28, 2012
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Heat boil me inside
set peace free
to show the world
I'm back,
filming myself thoughts
pushing reality away
and finally it's true
while every sadness
and every sorrow
an eye-liner along my eye
ending it's beginning
roll down my cheek
heating me a tear
one droplet reflecting the earth
sizzle fearlessly
shifting into gas
steam rise gracefully
an incense's smoke
a dancer curling into the wind
celebrating death too soon
create me a scene
then the last of you
disappearing into the atmosphere
like, "love me leave me,
like the wind..."
opening to the world once more,
believing my relief, living in my tears !

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:36 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
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The emotion is very powerful! Amazing work!
Shadow_Wolf GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:48 pm
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I like this poem, but I couldn't pull the meaning out of it.... other than that , well done
skydancer666 GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:52 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
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i like how you describe the poem keep up the good work!
.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 10:01 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Umm, Thanks? ;D
.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:57 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Sorry for the late reply (1 year late); Thank you for reading. I must say you are also an amazing writer! :D
.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:50 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you!  :D
.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:49 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you! And I haveto say that I agree about the lack of punctuation, this poem is quite old, I'll be sure to use more punctuation in the poems to come :D
Khaoula BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2013 at 6:09 pm
Khaoula BRONZE, Annaba, Other
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Such an amazing poem ... ! keep up with the good work .
thomakab14 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2013 at 4:22 pm
thomakab14 SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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Never would have thought to  put heat and tears together, Genius! Wonderful style. I have nto say the lack of punctuation bugged me, but that's just personal preference. Write on! -Kaleb
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 3:06 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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I must say you are an amazing writer Silver! :) This is very well written and I am so glad to read more. And know if you ever need anyone to talk to I am here.
Sweetwriter15 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:05 am
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An amazingly well written piece, I can feel the emotions!
king-raven BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 1:51 am
king-raven BRONZE, Kelowna, Other
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Really beautiful.. I like your writing style, it's unique!
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 12:03 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks so much Keep, Have a great 1 !
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 10:03 am
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This is a very beautiful piece. Very inspirational. I love your style of writting, and I love the part about the wind. Keep writting.
Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 3:42 am
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it is something unique....
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:56 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks Cookie, I love your style of poetry too !
cookiestar said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 6:48 am
Wow. I love this. It's beautiful, unique and its so meaningiful, I love your style of writing:).
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 4:55 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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lol, Thanks White...
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:57 am
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i really like this silver!!
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:17 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks, I'm really happy that you appreciate my work, The more you read the better you write !