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Holy Ground

February 23, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


You will never find a greater love.
with the alter so full of hope,
You'll come in and find a place;
You'll find Jesus,
in this holy place.
He speaks to you today,
the words a echo from my lips.
In this holy place you are found,
this holy ground you are safe.
So come beautiful souls of life,
come as you are to the sanctuary;
you'll always know his love,
cause Jesus Christ never fades away.


The author's comments:
"Something I wrote, and hope yall like it. I wrote this staring out my window one day thinking about all the souls who suffer so much. Thinking if they could only find this holy place they can be happy again."

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on Mar. 19 2012 at 7:35 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

You seem to be in a great mood! lol..Im glad I could add sparkle to your day Toran!!:) And thanks!!

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on Mar. 9 2012 at 8:30 pm
Kipitama, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Ahhhh!!!!This was beauuutiiifullll!!!! I loved it. That just added a 10% sparkle to my day!!!! :d

 


on Feb. 24 2012 at 7:38 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

I think this is beautiful---the image works well also. My favorite lines are the last six.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 7:27 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow, thanks:)

on Feb. 23 2012 at 10:13 pm
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD, Raynham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am proud of who I am. I believe in what I do.&quot; -Pavel Chekov (Star Trek The Original Series, episode: &quot;The Way To Eden&quot;)

I think this is beautiful. Your poem has a great message of Jesus' amazing love, and I like the way you worded it.  :)