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The End Of More Than Just A Relationship

March 3, 2012
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

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Drip drop, drip drop
Rain falls on the house
Like a constant reminder
That your gone...for good

And as i sit in silence
I think about reasons to live
But i can find none
My soul is gone...for good

If only you knew
That the angel of death was upon me
Maybe you would save me
But now im gone...for good

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My inspiration for this was in pieces by linkin park and my own past experiences
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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 10:41 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Awesome poem. Great use of emotion. Suggestion: end with a hook.
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:08 pm
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Really good! Love it! Wait.........do you happen to speak from experience........... ahahahaha akward..................
RebeccaMey SILVER said...
on May. 6 2012 at 3:45 pm
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I really like that you put your heart into it. Maybe you should end it with a rhyming cuplet... Kind of like Shakespeare's 18th Sonnet. 

But over all, I really like it.

dancing.inthe.rain GOLD said...
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short and simple, yet deep. i like it.