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The Bullet

March 6, 2012
By winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Never judge a book you've never read!


You shot into my heart
You broke it apart
It cannot be fixed
I’m bleeding
Red blood like a red rose
Pouring out of me
Like water rushing from a waterfall

I feel cold like Antarctica
My body is becoming stiff
I cannot move
It’s like I’m in a straightjacket

I cannot feel anything
Like my whole body is numb
When will all this end?
My eyes are going black
Like the night sky

Am I dying?
Am I already dead?

I cannot speak
My mouth will not move
My voice
It’s gone
I cannot talk

I see a bright light
I know I am dead

The bullet
Shot through my heart
And killed me


The author's comments:
I fell in love with a boy. I trusted him. He broke my heart. It felt like I got shot and died. So I wrote this so he knows what he did to me, and how it felt when he did it. He left me for my friend. I was hurt but I am thankful for her because she turned him down.

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on Nov. 12 2013 at 10:28 pm
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Never judge a book you've never read!

(: thank you

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:00 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

Heyy. this is sad but heartfelt. I hope you will find someone else to inspire you to write a happier poem!

on Aug. 24 2012 at 4:44 am
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never judge a book you've never read!

thank you sooo much girl

on Aug. 24 2012 at 4:43 am
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never judge a book you've never read!

thank you soo much

GittaR GOLD said...
on Aug. 22 2012 at 3:49 am
GittaR GOLD, Ararat, Other
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Every man has purpose with which he sets out in his life. Let yours be the doing of all good deeds- Robin Hood BBC Series

Do I like this? No....I looove it!!

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2012 at 2:46 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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&quot;Don&#039;t only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine.&quot; Ludwig van Beethoven

This is really good !!!!