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March 20, 2012
By gb12197 PLATINUM, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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gb12197 PLATINUM, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;next time you feel like a failure, think about how you are alive, and you have the opportunity to be successful.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;i don&#039;t have an attitude, i have a personality you can&#039;t handle&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;i am weird&quot;

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I am just a girl.
Like many others in the world,
But yet I am different.
They don’t see it.
Inside I am begging for someone to notice.
I still put on a brave face for the crowd.
I wonder how.
How do they see me?
Or don’t they care.
I just want to be free.
Free of all this despair.
I have hid for so long.
I hide from judgment ,
Because I am not strong.
I can’t handle there thoughts.
They will eat me inside and out.
I would take a chance if I wasn’t lost in doubt.

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sumer44 GOLD said...
on May. 26 2012 at 11:58 pm
sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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I really like this poem. It shows great emotion! Five stars
snowleopard100 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 14 2012 at 1:56 pm
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I like the idea about putting on a face especially when dealing with an innocent girl. Nonetheless tr flow of the poem could have been a little better in addition to te word chip ice. But overall nice poem!!!!
eternal_sunshine SILVER said...
on Apr. 11 2012 at 6:33 pm
eternal_sunshine SILVER, Minnetonka, Minnesota
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I love this poem. I related to it completely. It was so conflicting of itself, and I could feel your passion in it. I love the last line so much "I would take a chance if I wasn't lost in doubt". Completely sums up being a teenager for me. Beautiful job.