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Tick Tick Tock

March 27, 2012
By ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow"

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The temperature rose as you touched my lips, caressed my cheek, and seductively twisted my hair in your strong fingers. One thousand days ago we didn't even know each other, or love - it's funny how time ticks and tocks and grows.

I drowned in your chocolate eyes, feeling what I didn't feel before. Seeing what I hadn't before. Being who I wasn't ... before. But time took it's course. And a beautiful course that was.

Because of tick and tock, your mine now. And my heart is wrapped around yours. And my feelings roar from deep withing like a full grown lion. And I trust you... with everything - me, my life, and my heart. With every tick and tock I love you more and more.

Tick Tick Tock .... Tick Tick Tock...

© Victor V., Strathmore, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I wanted to show that you can only grow fonder in someone over time and time will allow you to see some things that you never would have noticed and feelings you would have never felt.
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This article has 6 comments.

ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 10:46 am
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow&quot;

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Thankyou :) i appreciate the feedback
Shivam GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 10:40 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

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i like it..... great
ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:26 pm
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow&quot;

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Thankyou glad you liked it.
ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:25 pm
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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Thankyou so much :)
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:24 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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Awesome job! I love it sooo much!
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on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:15 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Great imagery! Love it :)