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bloody lies

May 9, 2012
By QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Misty morning does not signify a cloudy day


The blood runs from your hands
and soaks into my carpet...

Each drip,
Each lie,
Why must you lie?
Why must you let the blood
drip?
She cried for freedom,
so you took her life...
I know better,
so I just clean the mess...


The author's comments:
my metaphor, when you lie, you might as well be killing

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QueenNys GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 4:19 pm
QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Misty morning does not signify a cloudy day

Thank you:}

QueenNys GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 4:18 pm
QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Misty morning does not signify a cloudy day

Really tis' more of a wife or long time partener with a killer husband who she cleans up after and hides the secrets so she dosent end up like all the rest, but, yea basically same concept. 

on May. 11 2012 at 1:43 pm
LovelyDuckling GOLD, Hamilton, Montana
16 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
A vision without action is a hallucination.

very nice... .it sounded like an abused woman who killed her husband...like he did her with her lies? espescially whe you talk about cleaning up the mess...mind checking out my poem 'those things that never were'?

on May. 11 2012 at 6:46 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
14 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Music is the air we breathe.&quot; ~Molly Rae Berger<br /> &quot;Being sad is a waste of time.&quot; ~Molly Rae Berger<br /> &quot;Girls should never be afraid to be smart.&quot; - Emma Watson

short, but simple. I liked it.