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Spring Flowers

May 22, 2012
By starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
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Smell like day, taste like night.
The green like steam lies in the ground as if its never been touched.

The purity seek when it dies.
But the inside is still rich.
The honey smell on the surface.

Spring flowers they don't die,
they live like no tomorrow.
They feel like no sanity I've felt.

The colors drive me crazy.
The shape calms me down.

I lie their and say spring flowers spring flowers.

© Carlie C.

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my flower i pick the color the shape the smell.
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starzforever GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2012 at 8:43 pm
starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
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thank you so much this is exacly wat i want to hear i want people to be honest with me thnx so much.
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2012 at 8:22 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Wow that was good. I really liked your beggining. My only sugesstion is maybe expanded on the part the first stanza on the second paragraph "the purity seek when it dies" maybe expand more in like another poem or in this poem. Keep it up