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But a methanol crease

May 20, 2012
By subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
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My Dear,
does the breeze blow for us?
Turning turbines and giving sweaty children a memory?
Or does it blast in spite if us, ripping through our hearts as if
we are but a methanol crease on the pages of the records of its home?

© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY

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subliminal96 GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 9:22 pm
subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
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Thanks again, Basaya. Your feedback is always appreciated!
Basya44 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 8:37 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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Does the breeze blow for us? That's a very interesting question actually. Does nature exist for us? Would it stop if we were gone? Hmmm...You would love my poetry. I would be thrilled to hear your feedback. You are awesome.