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Puzzle Pieces

June 9, 2012
By TMarie42 SILVER, Orland, California
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TMarie42 SILVER, Orland, California
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Pulvis et umbra sumus.

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"Puzzle pieces" is the phrase that comes to mind
When I curl my body against yours.
My back pressed to hard muscle wearing soft skin.
Our legs entwined in a complex maze.
Your strong arms wrapped around my delicate frame
Like a protective cage.
Your gentle breaths warm the back of my neck,
Your nose buried in my hair.
I inhale that familiar scent of you,
The one I can never properly describe
In the poems I try to write for you.
I don’t need to see your face;
I already know that your golden hair is askew,
Your long lashes casting shadows on your cheekbones
As you sleep serenely.
I hope you’re smiling softly,
The way you say I do
When I dream of the way we fit to each other
Like two puzzle pieces
Separated for so long,
Finally come together,
Never wanting to part again.

© Heather J., Slidell, LA

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 7:42 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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That's me^
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 5:23 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Loved this! The idea was original and unique, and your message added to the perfection! Good job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 6:20 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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"Like two puzzle pieces Separated for so long, Finally come together, Never wanting to part again." those were my favorite lines.

this poem was awesome. it was really good i also liked your message too.

Suggestion: I would maybe start with a hook in the begging. other that i really liked it

Leviathans_Abgel BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 6:17 pm
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~ The Kite Runner ~<br /> &quot;For you, a thousand times over&quot;<br /> ~ Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow ~<br /> This is Sky Captain. I&#039;m on my way.

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So pretty! Love it!