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The Right Guy

June 15, 2012
By LitaSoto GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
LitaSoto GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;Better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all&quot;<br /> &quot;All is fair in love and war.&quot;


Is it wrong to love? What is love?

Some say it's seeing a person and getting butterflies in your tummy. Others say it's the sex. Well I hope that it's some what like the first.
I want to see my true love and have my tummy tickle. I want jump into his arms and not let go. I want to be held not just for show but for comfort. I want to be taken to the beach and watch the sun go down . But what I really want is the love to be real.

I don't want the guy who will show me off to his friends like some kind of new dog. I don't want a guy who is going to hold me to make another girl jealous on purpose. I don't want the guy who will take me to a fast food place and call it fancy. I don't want a "thug" or "gangsta" who's going to break my heart on purpose. I don't want a guy with s** on his mind every hour of the live day. But I really don't want is a so called "player".

All I need is he fairy-tale story. But in this world that will be a huge miracle.


The author's comments:
This is really an opinion piece about the right guy. It's read with softness in your voice so that is what makes it a free-verse poem.

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LitaSoto GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2012 at 8:37 am
LitaSoto GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all&quot;<br /> &quot;All is fair in love and war.&quot;

Well yeah it impossible because these guys now jut want one thing and it's not the girl's heart. It's sad.

Katie-jo said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 7:13 pm
Katie-jo, Triangle, Virginia
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This is truly what a good guy should be! And, unfortunately, it probably would be a miracle to find someone as awesome as you described!

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