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July 6, 2012
By SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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You gave me your word,
And that meant more to me than anything in this world.
Don't you see?
You mean so much to me.
I sit and write about you all the time.
You're always on my mind.
It always brings tears to my eyes
Because this is nothing but a bunch of lies.
I put up with so much because of you.
I went through so much pain because of you.
When will this ever stop?
Do you really think you'll make it to the very top?
Open you eyes.
Please, it's time to realize...

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

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SofiuhhMarie GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2012 at 3:19 pm
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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Please share it. (: 
SofiuhhMarie GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2012 at 9:03 pm
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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Thank you! :D
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2012 at 12:25 am
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You just explained what I feel ..this is a amazing!!
Santiagopeoms PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 11:12 pm
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I love it not m kind of poem though only because Poe is more my thing but very nice dictation and clearity I could understand where your comming from where you have been you told me a story in less the 2 paragraphs props to you!
SofiuhhMarie GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 10:59 pm
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My poem is directed to someone who means so much to me. I meant to leave the reader hanging.
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This is a great message. I really like the part about don't you realize I write about you. Great poem. Suggestion: what is the meaning of this poem. I would aslo add a hook in the beginning.