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Lost In You

July 14, 2012
By TheHeartRemembers BRONZE, Jefferson, Ohio
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"Do we really live in the physical world we can touch, or the world we create in ours minds?" ~Charlie from "My Sassy Girl"

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I sometimes wish that time would freeze
I'd ignore the chilling of my body
And get lost in your gentle breeze
And as that wind turns reckless
I'd close my eyes and dive
Knowing I'm hardly breathing
Yet you make me feel so alive
Nothing would pull me back
From this rush of fire to my soul
I'd lay there with you forever
Letting time take its toll

© Hoang P., Rochester, NY

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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 4:50 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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A rose and a flame, are just the same.

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The first thing that came to my mind while reading this was Maximum Ride and Fang. It's great poem.
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:51 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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WOW that was so good and i can totally relate. Keep on writing u have a talent!! (maybe check out my stuff sometimes)