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September 25, 2012
By schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
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schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
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"Stop acting so small. You are the universe in ecstatic motion." ~Rumi

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the wisps of an unhappy soul
dissipating like mist
when the day heats up
and expunges all traces of
misery

© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA

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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 12:56 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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I know:) just being difficult. Your poem's really good
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 12:55 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Haha, I know I'm just being a jerk. It's good!
schuy PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 1:50 am
schuy PLATINUM, Chatham, Virginia
33 articles 4 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stop acting so small. You are the universe in ecstatic motion.&quot; ~Rumi

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Metaphorically, but I'm speaking of grief here.
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Feb. 2 2013 at 5:07 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Evaporation...?