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Invisible Ink

October 25, 2012
By HorseFeathers151 SILVER, Amarillo, Texas
HorseFeathers151 SILVER, Amarillo, Texas
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Actions, faces,names, and money are all forgotten in time. Words, words will last forever.


His eyes hold no color, his smile no hints
Tells me he loves me.
I am transparent, I open my heart
He’s told that I love him
But he’s not readable, a book of blank pages.
Invisible ink, he says I can read
I have the pen and the ink
He wants me to find him to seek out the secrets
Hidden white on white
I cannot see them.
My mind wants black and white.
So close he says, I’m almost there.
But there’s invisible ink.



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on Oct. 31 2012 at 4:40 pm
ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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&quot;What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well.&quot;<br /> ― Antoine de Saint-Exup&eacute;ry, The Little Prince

This poem is SO AMAZING!!!! You are so good!!! I love the metaphor that you use throughout the poem; it makes it more colorful and unique! Your poem truly is beautiful and it flows incredibly well! Keep writing!!!

on Oct. 30 2012 at 4:49 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Very creative and powerful

on Oct. 29 2012 at 11:03 pm
pinmaster95 GOLD, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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it felt repetitive to me but i know some people use that but i was interested, keep up the good work

on Oct. 29 2012 at 2:00 pm
WriterGirl1197 SILVER, Hamden, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am the wisest man alive, for I know one thing, and that is that I know nothing.&quot;-Socrates

Wow! This is incredible! I like it alot. Keep writing! -Writtergirl1197