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heart broken
November 30, 2012
I walk in the dark
Wishing I could find you there
Your arrow not hitting the mark
Wishin’ I could run my fingers through your hair
Now I have a broken heart
My life is now over
Now I am sober
With a brand new start
Thinks to you I have turned around
Something’s are still upside down
© Ariel L., New York, NY
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This article has 3 comments.
robertlow94 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2012 at 3:54 pm
thank you and i am not there yet and my english teacher helped me get to be that good
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 5 2012 at 5:23 pm
First off, let me say thank you for serving our country. I really appreciate and honor you. Second, you're a great writer! This is an absolutely beautiful poem. It really touched my heart. I especially like how you added rhyme to the lines. It made it stand out. I love your last line!! Great job; I'm really impressed.
