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November 30, 2012
By robertlow94 BRONZE, Weatherford, Texas
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I walk in the dark
Wishing I could find you there
Your arrow not hitting the mark
Wishin’ I could run my fingers through your hair

Now I have a broken heart
My life is now over
Now I am sober
With a brand new start
Thinks to you I have turned around
Something’s are still upside down

© Ariel L., New York, NY

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this is for all the guys who lost their love
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robertlow94 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2012 at 3:54 pm
robertlow94 BRONZE, Weatherford, Texas
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thank you and i am not there yet and my english teacher helped me get to be that good
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 5 2012 at 5:23 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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First off, let me say thank you for serving our country. I really appreciate and honor you. Second, you're a great writer! This is an absolutely beautiful poem. It really touched my heart. I especially like how you added rhyme to the lines. It made it stand out. I love your last line!! Great job; I'm really impressed.
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2012 at 3:51 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Sweet, Short and straight to the point!  When you said "sober" for some reason I thought about  sobber from alcohol. I aslo liked the last two lines at the end, it ended your poem nicely.