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This Angular Quadrophonic Atmosphere

December 6, 2012
By happyrocks SILVER, Regina, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'It does not do well to live in dreams and forget to live'. ~ Dumbledore, Harry Potter

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The stretched out sky
Intertwined with my eyes
Falls gently through the night

My head drifts down
On a rubber cloud
Bounce back.

The silver atmosphere
Crushes everything I hold dear
To my heart

The thickness of the air
Makes it impossible to hear
A feeble wave of sound

The wrong angle
An artfully strangled
emotion, captures

those eyes

© Rachel M., Camarillo, CA

The author's comments:
Geometry clashes with Emotion with Science with Truth and creates a unique kind of Chaos.
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