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When it rains

December 9, 2012
By Gabbers GOLD, Howard Beach, New York
Gabbers GOLD, Howard Beach, New York
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When it rains it makes me feel better
Like all the worries of the world are being
Washed away, it seems like a beautiful thing.

I remember one night several years ago,
Where i stood outside, i felt like I was going to die.
But then that beautiful smell enveloped me.
The smell that the air has before a down pour.

It started, and it matched the hurricane in my
Heart. It felt like i was being flooded.
I walked into the street and i stood in the rain.

My mother came out and told me i better
Come in, before it gets to bad.
I asked her if I could swim, but she told
Me I would drown.

For second I thought it might be
What i wanted. But decided
The hurricane in my heart was enough for one day.
But i stayed out just a little longer.
Until my worries were washed down the
Drain, with the rest of the
Rain.



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on Dec. 15 2012 at 11:42 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
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Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Very good! I just noticed a few minor mistakes, but aside from that, I love it! :)