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Souls Are Not Scientific MAG

December 15, 2012
By lotaslena PLATINUM, Orange, Texas
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not an atom, she said,
not an atom doesn't love you
in my whole body.
and she kissed me but
I was too busy thinking about
how souls aren't
made of atoms
to notice

© Liza C., Seattle, WA

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In my AP English Language & Compostition class, we had to pick what our favorite work was in this issue of TeenInk. Almost all the class picked long, drawn out love stories, with deep descriptions, which led you down to great imagery. Sorry for this being so long and drawn out, but I picked yours. It was so short, and it perfectly captured a moment in someone's life. I can't explain it, but this poem is powerful, and way more intellectual than the other works. Just thought I'd let you know.