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So...can you?

December 24, 2012
By CassieRaye GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
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Some may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one.

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Can you dance?
Light up the room
simply by moving your feet.
Can you smile?
Light up my day
with just a simple grin.
Can you stay?
Light up my life
by just being in it?
Can you be mine?

© Zachary P., Brooklyn, NY

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Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 1:16 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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&quot;No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist.&quot;<br /> - Oscar Wilde

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Wow! I truly love this poem. It has a great rythm and a wonderful use of imagery. I wasn't sure about the repetitivness, but I think it does work for this poem.