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January 28, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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My hero
My star
My promise to you is that
You'll stay in my heart
No matter what
I'll never forget
watch over me from afar
Guide me to the good
and always love me
no matter how long it's been

© Rebecca Y., Los Angeles, CA

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Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:36 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you! 
Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:35 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you! and no no one has told me that 
Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:17 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I love it. Your style is very Emily Dickson. Has anyone ever told you that. Love it.
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 12:10 pm
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that&#039;s why they call it the present&quot;

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short and pretty. good work.
Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:04 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you :)
Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:03 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you :)
TheCapturedBat GOLD said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 8:12 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
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If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger. <br /> -- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

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The devotion expressed in this poem is deep and beautiful.
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 2:17 pm
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
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&quot;I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; <br /> I lift my lids and all is born again.<br /> (I think I made you up inside my head).&quot;<br /> -Sylvia Plath

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This is lonely and beautiful at the same time. :3 Lovely