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February 1, 2013
By Andri55 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Andri55 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best revenge is success" by Frank Sinatra

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Cold expressions
Broken promises
New life ahead
If i could find it

Lose myself into the woods
Live in the forest
No Blanket to cover me
I am now lower

No more troubles
Until they stumble in my way
And destroy my dreams
I feel so gray

I'm not superficial
Just aspiring something
I want to find a place to hide
I want whats really worth it

© Joe F., Milford, CT

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abbey92 GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 10:04 pm
abbey92 GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
she smiles like she&#039;s so tough<br /> she&#039;s just someones daughter waiting for some one to love her<br /> <br /> never leave the one you love for the one you like because the one you like will leave you for the one they love

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i really like this. something i can relate to
JordanDoyle BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 5:35 pm
JordanDoyle BRONZE, Esko, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

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&quot;If people are making fun of you, you must be doing something right.&quot;<br /> -Amy Lee

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Really inspiring. Kind of reminds me of how i feel. really good job of capturing the picture.
Andri55 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 1:52 pm
Andri55 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best revenge is success&quot; by Frank Sinatra

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Thank you it was actually based on my personal story, your comment really motivated me
EtherealLibretto GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 9:56 am
EtherealLibretto GOLD, Z, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.&quot; -Oscar Wilde

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Wow what a great poem! I really liked it, especially the last line of the first stanza. You really captured some strong emotions with your words. Awesome!