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The Damned

January 30, 2013
By TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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Inhale deep
with closed eyes,
the sky darkens
the breeze dies.
The land burns
becoming dust
buildings fall
covered with rust.
Falling now
into the deep,
the voices lure
the beings creep.
Down here creatures
cold and still,
listen and wait
for the next kill.
Living, suffering
an eternal fate,
filled with nothing
but burning hate.
Roaming earth
an empty shell,
with a soul locked
in the pits of hell.


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Inspiration can be sparked in the most...devilish of ways~

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on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:11 pm
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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Thank you, I am happy I was able to capture your feelings

on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:09 pm
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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well thank you, that means a lot. Im glad I am inspire you

on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:08 pm
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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Thank you so much.

on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:07 pm
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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thank you i really appreciate it.

on Feb. 6 2013 at 11:37 pm
WinterGreer SILVER, Wasilla, Alaska
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dance like no one's watching/ love like you've never been hurt/ sing like no one's listening/ live like heaven is on earth

Wow, this is great. I love the not-so-subtle darkness and demonic side of this poem.

emmaRi0 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 9:39 pm
emmaRi0 SILVER, Middleton, Tennessee
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"No guts, no glory"

One word: Stunning.

on Feb. 6 2013 at 4:19 pm
Darkmagi BRONZE, Cheyenne, Wyoming
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Awesome. Your style is very inspiring. Exactly what i feel sometimes.

Andri55 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:10 pm
Andri55 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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"The best revenge is success" by Frank Sinatra

This   is amazing and really captures the way i feel at times