I like the overarching metaphor of wind/air, which, I assume, means spontaneous ideas/imagination. It's very original and well-written. Since I'm very interested in personality typing, I particularly enjoyed this little commentary on 2 very different personalities. :) Your beginning intrigued me; I desperately wanted to read the rest to understand the meaning of lines 3-6. However, I felt very confused until around line 23, when you start explaining. Then I went back and appreciated the beginning. I was really happy to find that your beginning wasn't just pretty, but meaningful, too. My favorite lines are 7-13. If oxygen means stories (or something like that), I like how lines 7-8 implies that stories are a very basic (and essential) part of the human existence, like oxygen, and that, therefore, it's that much more unbelievable that the "you" character doesn't need them. The layers of this are brilliant, especially when one reads the following 2 lines, which suggest that stories, or the start of stories, are everywhere. The last three lines are satisfying, especially the very last line. Overall, though it was confusing at first, I ended up really enjoying it! You've got talent!