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A Lovelier Sunrise

February 19, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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When the first ray of the waking sun
Penetrates the tranquil dew drop,
Dwelling on the jade leaf of a beautiful red rose,
Your cherubic face will hover,
Blushing baby pink over the flower...
A lovelier sunrise in Kashmir;
And in those exotic eyes of yours,
I behold the very sun;
Glowing gloriously as ever.

© Deborah P. Newton, MA

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necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 9:54 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.<br /> -If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

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beautiful, that is a very skillfully written poem
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:10 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you anonymous. :) looking forward to reading your poetry ;)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:07 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:06 am
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE, Chicago Hights, Illinois
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That is beautiful. I like the words you used for the detail of the poem. Its like I can see it as an oil painting with the perfect colors. Well done.
Five-oom BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:05 am
Five-oom BRONZE, Hopeton DC, Other
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Great Work!! Keep Going!!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:56 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you :)  
compassion GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:52 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

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Its really beautiful!! I could feel every word in the poem. nice flow! 
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:44 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you, Sabeen :)
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:42 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
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awww...beautiful.. (take this 'awww' as when you see a cute baby) kepp on writing.. :)