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i miss you

March 4, 2013
By thatBword SILVER, Cassopolis, Michigan
thatBword SILVER, Cassopolis, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Speak the truth.... even if your voice shakes and your heart breaks.


The light is fading
I can see it in your eyes
Others think you’re happy
I’ve seen you cry
I know it’s hard for you
There’s something deep within
The light in you could shine so bright
But here it becomes so dim
I wish you could be happy
I’ve tried so hard, I’ve tried
I hoped you would feel wanted
But something in you has died
So now here I sit
Counting the days
I never wanted you gone
I wanted you to stay
Cause the whole thing is
I wish you were here with me
A friend without the other
Is never how it should be.


The author's comments:
I wrote this after my friend left my school.

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on Mar. 16 2013 at 9:08 pm
thatBword SILVER, Cassopolis, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Speak the truth.... even if your voice shakes and your heart breaks.

My friend was going through a bout of loneliness. I go to a boarding school, and she couldn't handel being away from her family. She tried to make it through the year but it didnt work out. :(

on Mar. 16 2013 at 9:06 pm
thatBword SILVER, Cassopolis, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Speak the truth.... even if your voice shakes and your heart breaks.

Thank you so much for your comment. I have written more.. I hope you read them and like them.

on Mar. 14 2013 at 10:40 pm
A_Jean PLATINUM, Citrus Heights, California
40 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;we all carry these things inside that no one else can see. they hold us down like anchors and they drown us out at sea.&quot;<br /> &quot;i&#039;m trying to figure out which parts of my personality are mine and which ones I created to please you&quot;

Why did your friend leave your school? It seems like your poem is about something more than just her leaving.  My friend may have to leave my school and I was wondering if your friend had the same thing going on as mine does. I love the poem though. I feel the same way about my friend right now. :)

on Mar. 14 2013 at 9:25 am
babygirl102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
when i ran all i wanted was for you to come after me

i feel the same way if my friends move or someting but i truely love this poem . u should make more poems and show everyone because u r really good at it