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When I Burned MAG

March 1, 2013
By AudreyCB94 GOLD, Manlius, New York
AudreyCB94 GOLD, Manlius, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You must act as a man and not as an instrument of another's will." --J. Glen Gray


Fire ate my bones today,
and sucked the marrow clean.

Pupil swallowed iris
till color thinned like April ice.

So let blue swarm cerebrum
and yellow sizzle knees

till all I'm left
are eyes and arteries.



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on Mar. 18 2013 at 2:14 pm
GinryuStargazer BRONZE, N/A, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
This world is just a battleground for ideals.

Definitely one of the better poems on this site. The images were interesting--was the syntax done on purpose? It intrigued me. My one complaint is the third stanza; I understand the flow, but it sounds a tad awkward. Otherwise...I likey. I likey lots.

on Mar. 17 2013 at 12:00 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Wow, I love the description in this poem! The last line was especially lovely and chilling.