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I Remember

March 2, 2013
By nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
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I remember
The love we once shared
As we laid in the grass
Our souls freshly bared.
I remember
How you promised me
That I was your lock
And you were my key.
I remember
How we kissed under the moon
And how everything ended
Much too soon.
I remember
The lights in the windshield
And your panicked eyes
The nights our fates were sealed.
I remember
The long fight
You suffered through
That tragic night.
I remember
How we used to be.
Before you lost yourself
To save me.
I remember
The look in your eye.
As you whispered
Your final goodbye.
I remember
Every day I do
I wish I could forget
That night with you.

© Whitney T., Glenpool, OK

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LexusMarie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 12:07 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Hi! This is so, so good. Omg. The amount of emotion in here is too much for me to handle. This is amazing! It flows so nicely and it is written so well. This is impeccable. Keep writing, you're great!
Ashes3lol SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 11:00 pm
Ashes3lol SILVER, Columbus, Montana
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This is so sad... I can feel your emotion, annd it made me cry :.(
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:18 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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I'm crying my face off with all your emotions in this poem gosh your amazing, if anyone says this peoms bad im seriously gonna think they did not read it i love your emotions, flow, and rythm
Happymask PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:26 pm
Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
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That's awful! How could you write somethiing that emotional with such conviction? I'll never forgive you for it... (It's a great poem)
Choirgirl SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 8:03 pm
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This is really good.  I can relate to it also.  Continue the great work.
jaylen554 said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 5:00 pm
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I really like your poem, you are a great athour.  It's also really emotional
larissaecm SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 1:43 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
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the very first words got to be, i was literally tearing up by the end of this. 10/10 keep it up!