ya I know right :( I really despise the last pages of books......especialy when they kill my favorite charecters lol

I hate reaching the end of a book, it's like part of me dies. I want so desperately to keep reading to the end until I get there and then I want it not to be over :-(

hahah yes I know these feelings well....it's even worse when you finish a book series

A favorite subject of mine :). It semed a little weak at the end, like you were reaching. You seemed to have a better grasp of what you wanted to say... but not of how you wanted to say it. It is like the beginning and the end are different styles. I like the beginning a little beter, it seemed strong in stlye and really pulled me in. It chechoed much of my own thoughts on reading. The characters are my family! How dare the forces of (?????) Take them away! (One day I will figure out who to blame and THAT person will suffer ;) ) I think you started got a little to cauht up around "but I always reach that lone page...."ect. (Understandable, understandable....) the lines feel too lone. Perhaps you could take a look at em and see if you can break it up without having to modify the words too much. But I really DO identify with this. Good job! Nice to knkw Im not alone in my obsessive love of non existant persons.