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Before You Leave

March 28, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

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love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

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Before saying good-bye,





Please say you love me
I know I won’t see you ever, yet I love you without end





I cant face the reality




I am building my sympathy




Because I cant see you never




My love for you was forever



But why we cant be each others


I don’t know, possibly you don’t love me



Possibly I don’t belong with you


That’s why you didn’t sleep with me
I love you but I want more to say


So before leaving the door,
Please say you love like I do
I know I would be fake, if you say

It will be so easy to give,
My heart before you leave
So, now you know how deeper I love you
Good-bye my heart given love
I wont be seeing you with my heart full of love

© Shana G., Cross Plains, WI

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it's happening to many teenagers, a boy falls in love with a girl but the girl doesn't accept
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This article has 9 comments.

SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2013 at 12:23 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

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but sometimes its the other way around...... trust me i know.....
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2013 at 12:22 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

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like i said b4 .... i love it....!!!
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD said...
on May. 5 2013 at 11:17 am
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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BEAUTIFUL... very nice
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:36 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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This one was alright. It conveys a very real emotion and pretty well, but I think you could do more with it. There is more to love than just sleeping together, so show her you wanted her to give you her heart still even though she is rejecting you.
Hamza Waseem said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 3:41 am
nice work. 4.5/5
Haden_Stein said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 2:02 am
Haden_Stein, Goshen, Indiana
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pretty... im not really much for poetry, but this is a little interesting.
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 11:12 am
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Beautiful! Its amazing yet sad.... great!
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:35 am
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i love it ....!!!  
ChildOfTheArrow BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:34 am
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aww this is bitter sweet i like it