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Man, In His Curved and Imperceptible Fall

March 30, 2013
By nescaping GOLD, Corning, New York
nescaping GOLD, Corning, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Loyalty to petrified opinion never broke a chain or freed a human soul."—Mark Twain


He fears the down-edged spiral, the idea of impalement on a double-bladed sword;
The fungi which consume him as he decays: for what then will become of the sophisticated lord?

The untamed land gives birth to promise.
Her wedding veil conceals the view
of a conqueror, dressed in a gentleman's attire
whose lofty strides his zeal undo

For what will be of the civil lord, the animal lord, the savage lord?
What will be of he
whose righteous certainty
of light and property
rubs raw the fragile fabric of
perceived reality?


The author's comments:
Loosely based on Marlow, a character from Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness.

Title taken from a quote in the novel: "And at last, in its curved and imperceptible fall, the sun sank low, and from glowing white changed to a dull red without rays and without heat, as if about to go out suddenly, stricken to death by the touch of that gloom brooding over a crowd of men (Conrad 02)."

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nescaping GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 8:36 am
nescaping GOLD, Corning, New York
15 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Loyalty to petrified opinion never broke a chain or freed a human soul."—Mark Twain

Wow, thanks so much! :)

on Apr. 4 2013 at 9:49 pm
Celine1901 SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Fabulous word choice; the diction is impeccable! I also think the theme is very interesting!