green and paper | Teen Ink

green and paper

March 29, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
39 articles 0 photos 38 comments

energy is only a term
we use to describe
another thing we don't have
constantly unsatisfied
we are essentially wanting
as humans to have more
lacing ourselves together
with green and paper-

and to think that
the brain named itself



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.


OldYoungOne said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 2:54 pm
I am throughly angry that i am not able to rate the poems because my computer is acting totally reatarded. But anyway I like how you fit into your one style and dont try to mimick anyone elses. I truly respect you as a writer.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 4:31 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

The last lines made me smile. 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 7:58 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing.&quot; ~Camille Pissarro

  This has to be one of my favorite poems on this site. You are really an amazing writer. The last stanza was just like “wow”, and I wish I could think of a better way to word that. You did a really good job of making the style of the poem fit what you were talking about—especially in the way there was not a clear pause until the very end, which worked well to build tension.