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Only You MAG
August 31, 2008
It’s only you
Ever you
Who brings me close
To believing I’m
Something more than a
Promise and bones wrapped together with
Skin and whispers
It’s only you
Who keeps me
And makes me
Strong
And happy
With whom I’ve become
It’s only you
Ever you
With my heart tied
To a telephone line
I breathe
And
Release everything
That’s
Everything
To me
Because it’s only you
Ever you
Who I need
When I can’t
Make it on
My
Own.
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Charlize_Marie said...
on Jun. 27 2013 at 4:40 pm
You used great imagery to help us paint a picture when you said "promise and bones...skin and whispers." The way you formatted this poem definitely made it more effective along with the repetition "only you ever you" It flows gracefully. It was very easy to relate, I love it!
forever-and-always GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:55 am
i really love this.it says it all.
forever-and-always GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:54 am
i really love this.it says it all.
HillaryJo said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 4:29 pm
I loved this a lot! It really reminded me of my relationship with Jesus. I have been in church my whole life but just recently have I begun to follow Him with my whole heart. I love my Savior! He is my everything!
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 4:27 pm
awwww wow this is amazzingggg. so deep and sweet. i can relate so well. i luvv it please keep writingg
ItsaFunnyThing BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:43 pm
super cute :)
mandi caldwell GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:46 am
i loved that....great job!!! very heart warming!!!
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:12 pm
uber cute :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 3:05 pm
this is beautiful. keep on writing
Thethingiseek BRONZE said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 12:04 am
This is what I'll want to say in the future at my wedding for my vows. It..(I'm tearing up) beautiful
JasonsBaby GOLD said...
on May. 28 2009 at 11:43 am
i loved that,it was so heart felt.
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