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I Will Wait

April 2, 2013
By PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
12 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;there are 2 types of writer&#039;s: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder&quot;Brian Aldiss<br /> &quot;Some things i cannot change but til i try i&#039;ll never know&quot; Wicked the musical


AND I WILL SIT AND WAIT
IN THE GRASS THE HORSES ATE
FOR THE RAIN TO COME
NOT SURE WHERE FROM
TO FALL FROM ABOVE
AND I WILL WAIT FOR MY LOVE
ARE YOU STILL TRUE?
WHERE ARE YOU?
THE WONDER EXPANDS
AS I HOLD OUT MY HANDS
SINCE I DONT KNOW WHERE YOU ARE
I'LL JUST CATCH A FALLING STAR


The author's comments:
Have you ever thought that the person that you may marry is out there right now? When will you see them? I can wait

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on Feb. 4 2018 at 12:53 pm
BookWerm SILVER, Orem, Utah
8 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hello, boys.&quot; - Crowley, Supernatural

I love this poem. It's sounds so good when sung too. I can relate to it, as I've never had a crush and I'm not sure that I'll ever find love, but I have to keep remembering that I have a whole life and a world full of peopleleft.

PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2013 at 3:59 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
12 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;there are 2 types of writer&#039;s: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder&quot;Brian Aldiss<br /> &quot;Some things i cannot change but til i try i&#039;ll never know&quot; Wicked the musical

thank you all so much for the feedback! sorry it's capitalized...not sure why that happened

on Apr. 6 2013 at 6:58 pm
I really like the idea of your poem, not know where your true love is... but remembering they are out there. Really good work though maybe I would add a little onto it to make it more indepth. Really sweet  though :)

on Apr. 5 2013 at 10:16 pm
CassandraD BRONZE, San Jose, California
2 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Living is a book you can&#039;t close. Until your Days are over and the last lines of your story are THE END...&quot;<br /> - written by me.

I liked it. The ending made me think a little (because to me it seemed a bit random). 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 4:10 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

It's a really nice poem!!! =)

Maldivian said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:37 pm
Maldivian, Fuvahmulak, New York
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its great as i dont even talk    

on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:11 pm
Tabitha1233 PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 6 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
I would rather live my life as if there is a God and die to find out there isn&#039;t, than live my life as if there isn&#039;t and die to find out there is. Albert Camus

Wow! Very inspiring! Love it!

on Apr. 5 2013 at 2:57 pm
Thecurseofdestiel SILVER, Denton, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Wow.... I love it!!!