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The Suicide Note

April 9, 2013
By JustGettingBy BRONZE, Cary, Illinois
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If I should die
Before I wake
Tell the dogs
I loved them
But it's your fault
That now I've gone
In an unpeaceful slumber
All hope was gone
All love was past
All want to live was rotten
You should've cared
You should've thought
There might've been a risk
You threw your punch
You pulled your trigger
So if I die
Before I wake
Just know that it's your fault

© Devin N., Sherrills Ford, NC

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I went through a rough time last year and it's drastically changed the themes of my writing.
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