Rapture | Teen Ink

Rapture

April 24, 2013
By The_Confuserister SILVER, Edgecomb, Maine
The_Confuserister SILVER, Edgecomb, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

On Monday
I opened the floodgates
of my broken heart,
and let the world in.
It rushed at me,
silent and cold.
I died in the arms
of my English class.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.


Wallace BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 9:55 am
Wallace BRONZE, Edgecomb, Maine
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
BanANA CUSTard

DUDE, English class is RAAAAAADICAL

Abelinks GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 11:00 am
Abelinks GOLD, Woolwich, Maine
15 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wasn't sure if they were talking about bowling, or some weird sexual experience."

Wonderful again, I love your writng. I love mine more of course.  

on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:22 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Wonderful! Simply wonderful. The ending was surprising, but it was also a blunt snap back to reality. I also love how you said you opened the "floodgates," and then said the world  was "silent and cold," much like water through literal floodgates. I don't know if that was on purpose or not, but I especially love it. Good job.