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White Wings

April 25, 2013
By x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star


For every smile,for every laugh
she feels in my missing half
but shes not bound to this world
like I
Her place belongs above the sky
She drives me crazy, I can't get a grip
If she goes my heart will rip
I wish,I wish that I could fly
and follow her where the heavens ly
When she goes to the land of kings I will wish for all that the heaven
brings
For all the gold,and all the things
I just wish for her
and her white wings


The author's comments:
Falling for a fallen angel

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on May. 13 2013 at 12:33 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

This is really good ;)

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 4 2013 at 2:25 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Once again, good imagery. But the verses were a little jaunty if you know what I mean. They shot from place to place and from style to style. I felt that for such a high fantasy topic, the wording was a little simple, but that's just my opinion. Otherwise good job :)

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 1 2013 at 11:51 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Itts fine siple mistake :)

on May. 1 2013 at 11:35 pm
Reddy2325 BRONZE, Coronado, California
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The worst mistake you could ever make is being afraid to make one.&quot;

If any skeptics were wondering if I was a guy I am here to inform you that I am a girl and I like boys. Sorry for the mix up, haha.

on May. 1 2013 at 11:28 pm
Reddy2325 BRONZE, Coronado, California
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The worst mistake you could ever make is being afraid to make one.&quot;

This is really good! I fell the same feeling that you feel about another guy, so it really hit the heart. (hopefully that is the right saying, haha) Keep up the good work!

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 1 2013 at 11:27 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Thanks  

on May. 1 2013 at 11:21 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

I rlly liked the rhythm of this....overall very good (;

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 1 2013 at 12:50 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

THANXS!!!!!

on May. 1 2013 at 12:49 pm
Love_Me_Not BRONZE, Augusta, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
LAUGH AS IF IT WAS YOUR LAUGH ONE <br /> LIVE AS IF THEIR WAS NO TOMORROW <br /> LOVE WHEN YOU KNOW ITS REAL

MY FAVORITE OUT OF ALL