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Through the Window

April 28, 2013
By cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"


Through the window
We are separated
It's crystalline transparance
Draws the line between us

I gently fingerprint the blue glass
As my palm rests upon yours
We are only separated by half an inch
But yet so far apart

Half an inch
A foot, A mile?
I'd walk a thousand for you
The journey of a warrior

Because of this window.
For now I'll peer through it
Because as of right now
The love I breathed out
Has fogged up the window
Clouding reality with a blanket of fear

I'll wait for it to warm up,
The fog will disappear
And I'll break the glass
I'll bleed as the shards pierce my outstretched fist

Someday, I'll have the strength
To break this wall
And you will too
Then, and only then
Will our love be true



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on May. 3 2013 at 5:46 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thankies:)  

on May. 3 2013 at 12:52 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thanks so much for the feedback! :)

on May. 3 2013 at 12:51 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Aww thanks:)

on May. 3 2013 at 12:03 am
Melenium SILVER, Heritage Park, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Started from the bottom now we're here - Drake

wow one of the best poems I've seen in a while keep up the work!

on May. 2 2013 at 9:46 pm
Luckytheinvisiblefloatingwalrus SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Lucky the invisible floating walrus once caught an awful virus from a piece of bubblegum but he was not dumb so he ran away to play all day away from evil clappers but then again (dun dun dun) lucky couldbe a kidnapper!!!

I thought this was a beautiful poem! Wonderful word choice "crytalised transparency" i like how it was not really a window... made me think. cool poem

on May. 2 2013 at 8:47 pm
ANoOneWithAVoice GOLD, Peach Bottom, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." - Walt Disney

 loved it, beautiful and unique.

on May. 2 2013 at 8:10 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thankies:) 

on May. 2 2013 at 8:10 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thank you SO much, it means alot that people like you care to commnent. :)

on May. 2 2013 at 6:26 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

WOW! This just blew me away. I love your word choice. :D

on May. 2 2013 at 3:59 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Well, As long as I keep submitting I'm bound to get in, right? :)

on May. 2 2013 at 3:35 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Awehh. Thanks:)

on May. 2 2013 at 2:25 pm
ryanswofford BRONZE, Marcola, Oregon
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Great metaphorical value. Awesome poem!

on May. 2 2013 at 1:25 pm
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I don't know how this didn't get into the magazine :)

on May. 2 2013 at 4:53 am
chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Hebrews13:10

i really would wish to see like a video to illustrate the poem. its so good!! am speechless:)