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May 1, 2013
By x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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He who faces give no light shall never become a star

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I have lost who Iam I
can not think
From a straight path to a narrow road my mind draws a blank
Who am I really in my mind I can not see
I want to get back to who I am now
To who I used to be
One day I will find,One day I will see
A way to gain the real me
I need a cure A strange remedy to figure out who I am,
My true Identity

© Asha M., Philadelphia, PA

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x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 13 2013 at 12:29 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

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He who faces give no light shall never become a star

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Thanxs :)  
PotterWhoLocked GOLD said...
on May. 13 2013 at 12:27 pm
PotterWhoLocked GOLD, Montclair, Virginia
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“Wednesdays are limbo days. Monday is the beginning of the week, Tuesday is getting used to it, Thursday is looking forward to Friday and Friday is getting ready for the weekend. Wednesdays aren’t really anything in particular. They’re just there.”

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I love the line "I need a cure a strange remedy." Really nice. Good job.
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on May. 13 2013 at 12:24 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Very good, if simple. I think you could really expand....but really, I liked it!!! :D
GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 5 2013 at 4:08 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Good job. I liked it. It almost sounded almost like a song :)
x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 5 2013 at 12:35 am
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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He who faces give no light shall never become a star

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Thanks!!!!!!!!! be sure to look at more of the poetry on my page please !!! :)
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2013 at 12:32 am
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

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Dude this i feel all the time this is so me !!! -sunny-