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May 10, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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you paint pastel stars
and shade the charcoal sky
but your masterpiece is missing
constellations
universes
galaxies
that we, as humans,
have yet to find

© Chelsea H., Carlsbad, CA

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Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 22 2013 at 4:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Short but imbued with such thought that is as immense as the unviverse. It's almost sad in the end. But at the same time, I want to make sure with my own life that I do have planets and constellations like your poem says. One of my favorites so far from you. 
ChocolateLove SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 2:08 pm
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Wow, this poem is simply great. I love it :D 
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on May. 20 2013 at 9:21 pm
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that we, as humans, have yet to find This line really drew my attention in. It brought me to a different perspective to look at things as if I was the human race as a whole. I don't quite know how to explain it but it was very interesting! Well done!